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Post by blackpelt on Mar 13, 2008 15:11:11 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300][/glow] [shadow=red,left,300][/shadow] Name:Blackpaw
Gender: Female
Clan:Thunderclan
Rank:apprentice
Age:7 moons
Love life:None
History:When blackpaw was young she was attacked and now on one pad of her paw there is a scar. as a kit Blackpaw has gone through a lot of change as has been through a lot. Blackpaws dad was killed when Blackpaw was 3 moons old and Blackpaw almost died from green cough as a kit. [ b]Description long:Blackpaw has a jet black pelt and piercings green eyes. Her face shows intelligence and kindness. her nose is pink and soft.
Description (short):Blackpaw has jet black fur and piercing green eyes.
Personality: Blackpaw is a fast learner. shes loyal to her clan and would fight to the death. Blackpaw is kind and understanding after her past with her dad dieing, almost getting killed by greencough, and getting attacked when she was young. Blackpaw stands up to what she thinks is right which sometimes gets her in trouble. Blackpaw is also very curios which sometimes she gets her in trouble with some cats.
RP example: Blackpaw races through the trees, with new found speed. The sweet smell of prey wafted up into my mouth and nose. Making her mouth water. But she didn't stop she couldn't she had to find the patrol. They never came back. Everyone was confused and afraid the deputy was among the 4 that were missing!A knew sent wafted up into my nose and mouth shadowclan along with blood.
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Post by >>Sparrow<< on Mar 14, 2008 20:30:36 GMT -5
Please make the personality and history longer...oh and I think it's just an accident by u started 2 us first person:
A new scent wafted up my nose...
Just fix that and it'll be fine [/center]
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Post by blackpelt on Mar 15, 2008 8:40:20 GMT -5
I fixed it!
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Post by >>Sparrow<< on Mar 15, 2008 17:25:30 GMT -5
It's better! XD ok *takes out magic wand* I here by dub u *taps on shoulder with wand* ACCEPTED!
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