Post by >>[S]ilver on Aug 8, 2008 18:22:46 GMT -5
I sorta lost the whole plot written out, so here it is ... I shall re-write it! BOW BEFORE THE AMAZING SUPREME UBER AWESOME PERFECT TOTALLY COOL SILVER!!!
Many, many moons ago, before the oldest elder's parents were even born, at the time when the Clans were only just coming to the forest, another Clan lived in the forest, who called themselves SunClan. This SunClan was huge, because they were only one Clan, they never practiced any fighting skills. When these new cats came, they drove SunClan out, fighting and killing half the Clan before Earthstar, the leader of the Clan at the time, commanded they give up. The strange, new cats were too buisy celebrating their victory and establishing new Clan things, they forgot about SunClan. SunClan turned into nothing but a whisper on the breeze, forgotten to every cat but those in the Clan of ansestors; StarClan. SunClan knew of only one place to hide untill these other cats became bored of the forest and they could re-claim their territories. It was called the Earth Forest, a place under the normal forest and just as huge, lit up by a strange glow and an odd mist. It had bushes and some grass, but no normal light. It had prey, and no preditors. It was perfect. So they lived there for moons upon moons, untill Earthstar made a decision; they were never leaving, and so neither would SunClan. Since their new home had no sun, they re-named themselves. They were EarthClan now. She made it illigal to speak of the Great Battle, to leave the Earth Forest through the only way; the Main Tunnels, even to tell stories of the battle's greatst warriors who died. Any memory of what they once were was wiped out in a blurr of an generation. From then on, SunClan was illigal. Any cat who ever found the Main Tunnels never lived to tell the tale. Only a sclect few cats know about the Outer World, but for medicine cats who need herbs from there and leaders, who are only told because Earthstar swore vengance when she was running away from the Invaders. They live a peacefull life now, with their own ansestors, who are also calledSunClan, whom they speak with through a tiny tunnel, too small for any cat to exit through, which yellow light enters brightly through for five minutes straight at exactly Sun High every day. But leaders still plot revenge every second of their leadership ... and the battle is coming sooner with every second.
Changes are about to happen to EarthClan sooner than their leader would like. Two tom apprentices are too mystevious, and stumble across the tunnels one day while playing. They smell an odd, clear sent, of cats and herbs and rain. They venture through the tunnels, and find the outer world. One, amazed by the surface, ventures farther, the other goes back to alert the leader to the new found world. Their leader takes the apprentice out into the forest, talking calmly to him, and then, suddenly and quickly, kills him. Meanwhile ...
A young ThunderClan apprentice, only just aprentices two moons before, meets a strange smelling tom in the forest who claims to be from 'EarthClan'. They befriend eachother, and the male apprentice is living as a loner in the forest around ThuderClan. He shows her the tunnels, and tells her all about EarthClan. She informs Hawkstar, who sets up a warrior patrol to look around EarthClan territories, and is led by the EarthClan apprentice. They return about four days later, sleeping in the Main Tunnels and scouting the land in the day. Hawkstar waits two days, and apprentice's a litter of kittens. One seems to be very good at acting, and so Hawkstar trains the kit herself for two weeks, not in fighting but in acting. Then, the kit goes to live with EarthClan for five moons, at which time Hawkstar herself goes to bring her home. She leaves EarthClan, and tells her former mentor all she found out about this peacefull Clan. Hawkstar decides she wants to know more, and leads a very large patrol of warriors into EarthClan's territories to speak with the leader of EarthClan. EarthClan's leader says they were to leave, and if they ever came back they would all be killed and EarthClan would take back what was rightfully theirs. Soon, after the ThuderClan patrol comes home, a war breaks out, killing many warriors of all the Clans. Soon, during the most bloody of battles, there is a break in the fighting and the medicine cats of Thunder and Earth Clans both the the same dream, with the prophicy;
Kits forbidden
Find secrets hidden
Years of pain
Nothing to gain
A will stronger than any other
Louder than any thunder
The Lion shall roar
The leopard shall leap
The sun will brun
The wind will shreak
They have no clue what this means, and so they ignore it. Some moons later, two warriors meet in battle, one the daughter of ThudnerClan leader Hawkstar and one the son of a great EarthClan warrior. They fall in love, and meet against everything the two Clans belive in.
After two years, she gets pregnant, and scared of what might happen if anyone found out, they run away to an apple farm off the bounderies of RiverClan's river. She kits, and gives birth to four kittens; Lion (A bright yellow-ginger tom, with a brown neck), Leopard (A white-gray she-cat with dark silver spots), Wind (A white and brown tabby tom), and Sun (A deep ginger she-cat with amazing green eyes). --ONE PART NAMES--
THe four kittens grow and listen to stories of how the war started, and don't know they are part of they prophicy to end it. Their parents both die suddenly one day, leaving their almost grown kits to fend for themselves. Lion, the eldest and strongest, leavs his sisters and brother to seek out what his father had called the 'Clans', and help them end a battle. He finds them fighting a battle at the base of the Mountain, and finds refuge in a small, hidden cave there. He gets a dream while there, telling him that he and his sibblings are to find a way to stop the war, from his father. He goes back, and finds his sisters and brother, and tells them what they must do. They make their way to the underground, and find a cave in the wall, smelling only of a very, very stale badger. They live there for three moons when Wind met a tom from EarthClan while out hunting. They fall in love, and she becomes pregnant. Her brother Lion gets mad, and shunns her, but Wind and Leopard sympithisize and help her through everything. After this all starts, Leopard meets an EarthClan tom, and they fall in love, as does Wind with an EarthClan she-cat. His mate becomes pregnant, but she dies in birth and so no cat every knew whose kits they were. Leopard finds she is unable to become pregnant, and this mades her horribly sad, because she loves this tom more than anything. Sun kitts, and she dies in the process. Because of his greif, her mate joins their small group. She had three kittens, one of which they name after her, because they look exactly alike. They take the kits and Sun's body to the 'no man's land' of the battle. They stand there with the body and the kits, showing everyone the innosence that the kits were, whatever clan they were from. How Sun died for them because she dind't care who their father was, because love could exist anywhere if you only wanted to see it. Leopard and Wind step forward with their EarthClan mates, too, and to all their wonder and delight, Lion also had an EarthClan mate. He reminds all the Clans fighting there that there should be no war because they were all really the same, and they were all happy where they were now. The war stops, and EarthClan goes back to where they came from, but they also take time to train their apprentice's in the ThunderClan grounds, as long as they did not hunt. They all live in harmony once again.
--DONE--