Post by firestar100 on Jan 24, 2008 12:07:27 GMT -5
Story:
The clans has been in peace and harmony for many moons in till a clan called Darkclan attacked Snowclan and killed there deputy. Snowclan leader had picked a new deputy but a warrior is trying to be leader but who could this warrior be? Not just a warrior but could it be a kit? Meanwhile two young kits, Mosskit and Cloudkit are trying to find there real mother. They had figured out that there mother that is with them is not there mother, there mother right now is Featherpool, but something happened that never happened in clan history as a leader struggled to survive. As Mosskit and Cloudkit look around for there mother, they found a big secret that their mother has never told them and it will soon be revealed, but the clan is falling apart and cats had been fighting about trust.
Cats
Snowclan
Leader: Racestar~ A dark tabby tom with green eyes
Apprentice:Mosspaw
Deputy: Snowheart~ A pretty silver she-cat with beautiful coat and blue eyes
Apprentice: Cloudpaw
Medicine cat: Stormcloud~ A silver and gray she-cat
Warriors:
Fallenheart~ A dapple ginger she-cat with green eyes
Gingertapple~ A ginger tom with green eyes
Hawkfrost~ A dark brown tabby tom
Apprentice: Rainpaw
Deathclaw~ A black tom with green eyes
Jazzheart~ A big white she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentice:Moonpaw
Featherpool~ A dark silver she-cat with amber eyes
Tigerfang~A dark ginger tom cat with ember eyes(Just added)
Apprentice: Breezpaw
Apprentice:
Mosspaw~ A black and white she-cat with blue eyes and white tail tip and white paws
Moonpaw~ A dark silver and white she-cat with ember eyes
Graypaw~ A dark gray tom with yellow eyes(Sister Moonpaw)
Rainpaw~ A black cat with an diamond on his chine, his eyes are yellow
Breezpaw~ A pure black tom cat with dark blue eyes. His fur is swift and blows in the colfd breeze. His fur never gets cold(Sister Moonpaw, Brother Graypaw? or is it true?)
Cloudpaw~ A small white tom with dark blue eyes(Sister Mosspaw)
Queens:
Rainbowtail~ A creamy colored she-cat with beautiful blue eyes
(Leafkit, Pebblekit, Whitekit, and Openkit)
Silvermoon~ A beautiful silver and white she-cat with icy blue eyes
(Bramblekit, Firekit, Lionkit)
Elders:
Wimperclaw~ A black tom with dark amber eyes
Yellowtail~ A dark ginger she-cat with green eyes
Darkclan
Leader: Deathstar~ A black tom with powerful paws and has blue eyes
Deputy: Jaggerclaw~ A ginger and black tom with light yellow eyes
Medicine cat: Rainshadow~ A gray and white tom
Warriors:
Fogfrost~Dark brown tabby tom with dark amber eyes
Quietfur~A dark silver she-cat with light blue eyes
Darkshadow~ A black tom with flaming amber eyes
Shadowfur~ A smoky black and gray tom
Smokefur~A dark smoky gray tom
Nightshadow~A black and white tom
Washfeather~A dark ginger she-cat
Thornface~A light brown tabby tom
Spiderface~A black tom with white paws and a white tail tip
Dashfoot~A mixed gray and silver she-cat
Pepperstripe~A big white tom with blue eyes
Waterclan
Leader: Shorestar~ A silver she-cat with a long tail and has strong paws
Deputy: Watershadow~ A black and white tom with white stripes on his pelt
Medicine cat: Lakeheart~ A ginger and white she-cat with long claws and bright eyes
Brizzleclan
Leader: Heavystar~ A big white tom a huge tail
Deputy: Quickfeather~ A small white she-cat with blue eyes
Medicine cat: Swiftheart~ A ginger and white tom
A dark brown tabby tom eyes grew wide as he saw his clan under attack. He looked around for his deputy. He spotted a black tom running to him. The black cat pounced on him. The brown tabby tom yelled with battle cry then slaped his paw at the cats face. The brown tabby got to his paws.
"Deathstar! What is it this time! My clan did nothing to you!" He growled.
Deathstar hissed. "So what, Racestar. We are here to take your territory and make it ours!"
Racestar growled. "Well you aren't getting away with this! Not if I can help it!” Racestar pounced on Deathstar. He slashed his claws down his face. “Darkclan will not get my territory!” He yelled.
Deathstar ducked under him. Racestar blinked. He swung around to see Deathstar but, before he could attack Deathstar bit down on Racestar’s neck. Racestar struggled to break free. He swung his paw to Deathstar’s face. Deathstar yelled with pain. Racestar ran over to his tail then bit down hard. Deathstar hissed then tried to break free. Over on the otherside of the camp. A silver she-cat was siting next to some bushes as her mate defended her. The silver she-cat was giving birth to her two kits. Featherpool was next to her. The silver she-cat eyes glew as she saw her mate fell to the ground. He layed still. Not moving a mousle. The silver she-cat’s eyes glowed as she yelled.
“Vipertail!” Racestar let go of Deathstar’s tail then turned his head to the dead body of his deputy. “Vipertail!” He yelled. Racestar gave a glance at Deathstar and hissed with rage. Deathstar backed away then yelled.
“Retreat!” The Darkclan cats stopped fighting then ran out of Snowclans territory. Some of Snowclans cats ran after them. Hissing and growling. Racestar watched Deathstar leave then walked over to the silver she-cat. He bowed his head.
“We will honor him and so would Starclan. He would have been a great leader.” He meowed.
A black and white cat opened her eyes. Her blue eyes glowing as she looked at the sky. She started to walk out of the nursery. "Mosskit! Get back here!" Mosskit turned around to see a dark silver she-cat running after her. "Mosskit! You know your not aloud out of the nursery!" She snapped. Mosskit looked into her eyes. "But its so boring in there! I wanted to have some action!" She winded. The dark silver she-cat shook her head. "You know your not aloud out of the nursery in till your an kit....I mean apprentice." She told her. Mosskit just grined. "Let's go! Now!" She waved her tail to the nursery. "Aw...Ok Featherpool." She meowed then followed her mother back to the nursery. As Mosskit walked to the nursery she spotted her brother near by.
The small white tom eyes glowed. He stared at his sister then meowed.
"Let me guess......You tried to get out of the nursery to find are real mother?" The white tom had asked.
Mosskit looked into his eyes. She narrowed her eyes then meowed.
"Yeah! What else do you think I would be doing! Mousebrain!" She hissed. My brother can be such a pain in the neck! She thought.
Her brother laughed then meowed. "Your so funny." He stopped laughing then went on. "Stop this ok. Wait in till we are apprentice so that we can get out of this boring nursery." He continued. "Then we can go any ware we want, but not on the other clans territory. Then we can look around for are real mother." He meowed. He opened his jaws then shut them again.
Mosskit flicked her ear. "What was that for? Why where you yawning. Go back to sleep Cloudkit!" She hissed. "You and I have been keeping this secret for a while and I think it's time to find are mother sooner or later! Also, where going to be an apprentice in two more moons! I can't wait that long!" She winded. They had found out about Featherpool and there birth. Cloudkit and I figured out that she wasn't are real mother and we have been tring to find her ever since. We heard she's in Snowclan though. We have been waiting for a long time now.
Cloudkit just sighed. "Your so stubern."
"So are you! Mousebrain!" Mosskit growled. She watched her brother Cloudkit sleep. He was snoring loud that it was hurting Mosskit's ears. Mosskit sat alone looking outside of the nursery. She sighed. When will I ever get to figure out who’s-but a voice had interrupted her thoughts.
“Let cats old enough to cat there own prey! Join here under the Snowrock for a clan meeting!” A brown tabby tom yelled. Mosskit ran out of the nursery. It’s Racestar. He probably picking out a new deputy. Yes. Now I can scan around the meeting to find my real mother. She thought.
"Who do you think is going to be the new deputy?" Mosskit turned her head to see a dark silver and white she-cat behind her. "Moonkit! Hi......I think it's going to be Snowheart." She meowed.
Moonkit nodded. "Me too."
"You too always pick the same cats, or should I say you two pick the same thing all the time." Moonkit hissed at the dark gray tom. "Why do you have to be so negative, Graykit?" She asked.
Graykit just shrugged. "Its true." He meowed. "It's so true." Graykit looked at the kit behind him. "Thank you. At least Rainkit thinks so."
Mosskit eyes glowed as she saw the black and white tom. Rainkit just nodded at her then ran over to the other cats. Mosskit began to blush. She tried to hide it so that Moonkit and Graykit cloudn't see. She had a crush on Rainkit but sometimes he just ignores her and is such a pain in the neck like her brother.
Mosskit walked back to the nursery then poked Cloudkit. "Come on Mousebrain! Or you will miss the ceremony." She growled. Cloudkit opened his eyes then fallowed Mosskit out of the nursery.
"It's time to pick a new deputy!" Racestar yelled. "The time has come to name the new deputy of Snowclan say these words below StarClan so Vipertail can hear and approve my new choice!" He yelled.
Mosskit could tell he was still shocked from Vipertail's death.
"Snowheart will be the new deputy of Snowclan!" He yelled. Mosskit sqeaked. Moonkit looked at her brother and Rainkit. "Hay! I told yeah so!" She giggled.
"So!" They both shrugged.
Moonkit just hissed. "Your no fun at all!" She then turned around.
Snowheart blinked then walked up to her leader while other called her name.
"Snowheart! Snowheart!" They yelled.
Racestar looked into Snowheart's eyes. "You know the reason why I picked you." He whispered. "You are a brave warrior and I trust you the most." He went on. "You had fallowed the warrior code for a long time now." He purred.
Snowheart looked into his eyes. Her blue eyes where fixed on his. She nodded slowly then jumped down from the Snowrock. Racestar jumped down from the rock then headed to his den. Mosskit watched Snowheart. Snowheart walked over to Featherpool then sneaked out of camp. Mosskit looked puzzled. What are they up to? She thought. She looked around the clearing making shore that nobody is watching her then craped out of camp. Mosskit hide into the bushes. She watched closely as she saw Snowheart and Featherpool talking to each other. Mosskit was able to hear what they where saying.
"How are the kits?" Snowheart asked. Her eyes glowing as she waited for an answer.
"They are doing fine." Featherpool purred. "Mosskit always tryed to get out of the nursery and Cloudkit is always sleeping."
Mosskit looked puzzled. Then she closed her eyes as the words repeated into her mind. How are the kits? Is Snowheart my mother. If so then why did she give me and Cloudkit to Featherpool. Is it because it was the only way she can become a deputy? Mosskit thought. Mosskit shocked her head then looked at Snowheart and Featherpool.
"That's how kit's are." Snowheart told her. "They always try to come out of the nursery."
Featherpool looked down at her paws. What's wrong with Featherpool. Is she keeping something? Mosskit thought.
"Is there something wrong?" Asked Snowheart.
Featherpool's eyes begain to glow. "I think they already no that I'm not there real mother." She sighed.
Snowheart eyes glowed wide. Mosskit was about to gasp but covered her mouth with her tail.
"What do you mean?" Asked Snowheart. "Did you tell them?"
Featherpool shock her head. "No. I haven't. I think they already know because Mosskit is always running out of the nursery scaning all the cats. Like she is looking for her real mother."
Snowhearts eyes got wide again. "You know how kits are.........." She broke off as she heard something in the bushes. "What was that?" She asked.
Oh no! I got to get out of here before they see me! Mosskit thought. She turned around and was about to flee but a brown tabby tom looked down at her. "What are you doing out of the nursery!" The cat demanded. Mosskit's eyes got wide as she notice it was Racestar.
The clans has been in peace and harmony for many moons in till a clan called Darkclan attacked Snowclan and killed there deputy. Snowclan leader had picked a new deputy but a warrior is trying to be leader but who could this warrior be? Not just a warrior but could it be a kit? Meanwhile two young kits, Mosskit and Cloudkit are trying to find there real mother. They had figured out that there mother that is with them is not there mother, there mother right now is Featherpool, but something happened that never happened in clan history as a leader struggled to survive. As Mosskit and Cloudkit look around for there mother, they found a big secret that their mother has never told them and it will soon be revealed, but the clan is falling apart and cats had been fighting about trust.
Cats
Snowclan
Leader: Racestar~ A dark tabby tom with green eyes
Apprentice:Mosspaw
Deputy: Snowheart~ A pretty silver she-cat with beautiful coat and blue eyes
Apprentice: Cloudpaw
Medicine cat: Stormcloud~ A silver and gray she-cat
Warriors:
Fallenheart~ A dapple ginger she-cat with green eyes
Gingertapple~ A ginger tom with green eyes
Hawkfrost~ A dark brown tabby tom
Apprentice: Rainpaw
Deathclaw~ A black tom with green eyes
Jazzheart~ A big white she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentice:Moonpaw
Featherpool~ A dark silver she-cat with amber eyes
Tigerfang~A dark ginger tom cat with ember eyes(Just added)
Apprentice: Breezpaw
Apprentice:
Mosspaw~ A black and white she-cat with blue eyes and white tail tip and white paws
Moonpaw~ A dark silver and white she-cat with ember eyes
Graypaw~ A dark gray tom with yellow eyes(Sister Moonpaw)
Rainpaw~ A black cat with an diamond on his chine, his eyes are yellow
Breezpaw~ A pure black tom cat with dark blue eyes. His fur is swift and blows in the colfd breeze. His fur never gets cold(Sister Moonpaw, Brother Graypaw? or is it true?)
Cloudpaw~ A small white tom with dark blue eyes(Sister Mosspaw)
Queens:
Rainbowtail~ A creamy colored she-cat with beautiful blue eyes
(Leafkit, Pebblekit, Whitekit, and Openkit)
Silvermoon~ A beautiful silver and white she-cat with icy blue eyes
(Bramblekit, Firekit, Lionkit)
Elders:
Wimperclaw~ A black tom with dark amber eyes
Yellowtail~ A dark ginger she-cat with green eyes
Darkclan
Leader: Deathstar~ A black tom with powerful paws and has blue eyes
Deputy: Jaggerclaw~ A ginger and black tom with light yellow eyes
Medicine cat: Rainshadow~ A gray and white tom
Warriors:
Fogfrost~Dark brown tabby tom with dark amber eyes
Quietfur~A dark silver she-cat with light blue eyes
Darkshadow~ A black tom with flaming amber eyes
Shadowfur~ A smoky black and gray tom
Smokefur~A dark smoky gray tom
Nightshadow~A black and white tom
Washfeather~A dark ginger she-cat
Thornface~A light brown tabby tom
Spiderface~A black tom with white paws and a white tail tip
Dashfoot~A mixed gray and silver she-cat
Pepperstripe~A big white tom with blue eyes
Waterclan
Leader: Shorestar~ A silver she-cat with a long tail and has strong paws
Deputy: Watershadow~ A black and white tom with white stripes on his pelt
Medicine cat: Lakeheart~ A ginger and white she-cat with long claws and bright eyes
Brizzleclan
Leader: Heavystar~ A big white tom a huge tail
Deputy: Quickfeather~ A small white she-cat with blue eyes
Medicine cat: Swiftheart~ A ginger and white tom
Proluge
A dark brown tabby tom eyes grew wide as he saw his clan under attack. He looked around for his deputy. He spotted a black tom running to him. The black cat pounced on him. The brown tabby tom yelled with battle cry then slaped his paw at the cats face. The brown tabby got to his paws.
"Deathstar! What is it this time! My clan did nothing to you!" He growled.
Deathstar hissed. "So what, Racestar. We are here to take your territory and make it ours!"
Racestar growled. "Well you aren't getting away with this! Not if I can help it!” Racestar pounced on Deathstar. He slashed his claws down his face. “Darkclan will not get my territory!” He yelled.
Deathstar ducked under him. Racestar blinked. He swung around to see Deathstar but, before he could attack Deathstar bit down on Racestar’s neck. Racestar struggled to break free. He swung his paw to Deathstar’s face. Deathstar yelled with pain. Racestar ran over to his tail then bit down hard. Deathstar hissed then tried to break free. Over on the otherside of the camp. A silver she-cat was siting next to some bushes as her mate defended her. The silver she-cat was giving birth to her two kits. Featherpool was next to her. The silver she-cat eyes glew as she saw her mate fell to the ground. He layed still. Not moving a mousle. The silver she-cat’s eyes glowed as she yelled.
“Vipertail!” Racestar let go of Deathstar’s tail then turned his head to the dead body of his deputy. “Vipertail!” He yelled. Racestar gave a glance at Deathstar and hissed with rage. Deathstar backed away then yelled.
“Retreat!” The Darkclan cats stopped fighting then ran out of Snowclans territory. Some of Snowclans cats ran after them. Hissing and growling. Racestar watched Deathstar leave then walked over to the silver she-cat. He bowed his head.
“We will honor him and so would Starclan. He would have been a great leader.” He meowed.
Chapter 1
A black and white cat opened her eyes. Her blue eyes glowing as she looked at the sky. She started to walk out of the nursery. "Mosskit! Get back here!" Mosskit turned around to see a dark silver she-cat running after her. "Mosskit! You know your not aloud out of the nursery!" She snapped. Mosskit looked into her eyes. "But its so boring in there! I wanted to have some action!" She winded. The dark silver she-cat shook her head. "You know your not aloud out of the nursery in till your an kit....I mean apprentice." She told her. Mosskit just grined. "Let's go! Now!" She waved her tail to the nursery. "Aw...Ok Featherpool." She meowed then followed her mother back to the nursery. As Mosskit walked to the nursery she spotted her brother near by.
The small white tom eyes glowed. He stared at his sister then meowed.
"Let me guess......You tried to get out of the nursery to find are real mother?" The white tom had asked.
Mosskit looked into his eyes. She narrowed her eyes then meowed.
"Yeah! What else do you think I would be doing! Mousebrain!" She hissed. My brother can be such a pain in the neck! She thought.
Her brother laughed then meowed. "Your so funny." He stopped laughing then went on. "Stop this ok. Wait in till we are apprentice so that we can get out of this boring nursery." He continued. "Then we can go any ware we want, but not on the other clans territory. Then we can look around for are real mother." He meowed. He opened his jaws then shut them again.
Mosskit flicked her ear. "What was that for? Why where you yawning. Go back to sleep Cloudkit!" She hissed. "You and I have been keeping this secret for a while and I think it's time to find are mother sooner or later! Also, where going to be an apprentice in two more moons! I can't wait that long!" She winded. They had found out about Featherpool and there birth. Cloudkit and I figured out that she wasn't are real mother and we have been tring to find her ever since. We heard she's in Snowclan though. We have been waiting for a long time now.
Cloudkit just sighed. "Your so stubern."
"So are you! Mousebrain!" Mosskit growled. She watched her brother Cloudkit sleep. He was snoring loud that it was hurting Mosskit's ears. Mosskit sat alone looking outside of the nursery. She sighed. When will I ever get to figure out who’s-but a voice had interrupted her thoughts.
“Let cats old enough to cat there own prey! Join here under the Snowrock for a clan meeting!” A brown tabby tom yelled. Mosskit ran out of the nursery. It’s Racestar. He probably picking out a new deputy. Yes. Now I can scan around the meeting to find my real mother. She thought.
"Who do you think is going to be the new deputy?" Mosskit turned her head to see a dark silver and white she-cat behind her. "Moonkit! Hi......I think it's going to be Snowheart." She meowed.
Moonkit nodded. "Me too."
"You too always pick the same cats, or should I say you two pick the same thing all the time." Moonkit hissed at the dark gray tom. "Why do you have to be so negative, Graykit?" She asked.
Graykit just shrugged. "Its true." He meowed. "It's so true." Graykit looked at the kit behind him. "Thank you. At least Rainkit thinks so."
Mosskit eyes glowed as she saw the black and white tom. Rainkit just nodded at her then ran over to the other cats. Mosskit began to blush. She tried to hide it so that Moonkit and Graykit cloudn't see. She had a crush on Rainkit but sometimes he just ignores her and is such a pain in the neck like her brother.
Mosskit walked back to the nursery then poked Cloudkit. "Come on Mousebrain! Or you will miss the ceremony." She growled. Cloudkit opened his eyes then fallowed Mosskit out of the nursery.
"It's time to pick a new deputy!" Racestar yelled. "The time has come to name the new deputy of Snowclan say these words below StarClan so Vipertail can hear and approve my new choice!" He yelled.
Mosskit could tell he was still shocked from Vipertail's death.
"Snowheart will be the new deputy of Snowclan!" He yelled. Mosskit sqeaked. Moonkit looked at her brother and Rainkit. "Hay! I told yeah so!" She giggled.
"So!" They both shrugged.
Moonkit just hissed. "Your no fun at all!" She then turned around.
Snowheart blinked then walked up to her leader while other called her name.
"Snowheart! Snowheart!" They yelled.
Racestar looked into Snowheart's eyes. "You know the reason why I picked you." He whispered. "You are a brave warrior and I trust you the most." He went on. "You had fallowed the warrior code for a long time now." He purred.
Snowheart looked into his eyes. Her blue eyes where fixed on his. She nodded slowly then jumped down from the Snowrock. Racestar jumped down from the rock then headed to his den. Mosskit watched Snowheart. Snowheart walked over to Featherpool then sneaked out of camp. Mosskit looked puzzled. What are they up to? She thought. She looked around the clearing making shore that nobody is watching her then craped out of camp. Mosskit hide into the bushes. She watched closely as she saw Snowheart and Featherpool talking to each other. Mosskit was able to hear what they where saying.
"How are the kits?" Snowheart asked. Her eyes glowing as she waited for an answer.
"They are doing fine." Featherpool purred. "Mosskit always tryed to get out of the nursery and Cloudkit is always sleeping."
Mosskit looked puzzled. Then she closed her eyes as the words repeated into her mind. How are the kits? Is Snowheart my mother. If so then why did she give me and Cloudkit to Featherpool. Is it because it was the only way she can become a deputy? Mosskit thought. Mosskit shocked her head then looked at Snowheart and Featherpool.
"That's how kit's are." Snowheart told her. "They always try to come out of the nursery."
Featherpool looked down at her paws. What's wrong with Featherpool. Is she keeping something? Mosskit thought.
"Is there something wrong?" Asked Snowheart.
Featherpool's eyes begain to glow. "I think they already no that I'm not there real mother." She sighed.
Snowheart eyes glowed wide. Mosskit was about to gasp but covered her mouth with her tail.
"What do you mean?" Asked Snowheart. "Did you tell them?"
Featherpool shock her head. "No. I haven't. I think they already know because Mosskit is always running out of the nursery scaning all the cats. Like she is looking for her real mother."
Snowhearts eyes got wide again. "You know how kits are.........." She broke off as she heard something in the bushes. "What was that?" She asked.
Oh no! I got to get out of here before they see me! Mosskit thought. She turned around and was about to flee but a brown tabby tom looked down at her. "What are you doing out of the nursery!" The cat demanded. Mosskit's eyes got wide as she notice it was Racestar.
