Snakesong

[snakesong]

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Name: Snakesong

Gender: female

Clan: loner

Rank: loner

Age: 27 moons

Love life: none

History: none

Description (long): Has pearcing yellow snake-like eyes and blood stained fangs. Very large compared to most cats. Has black silver and red fur. Known as the serpent of the forest. Raids nurserys often looking for a lunch of kits. Elders tell stories about him to frighten kits and apprentices.

Description (short): Just look up....

Personality: Snake like, cannible, pure evil. Has an uncontrollible bloodthirst. Very smart and sly.

RP example: (Only needed ONCE)

A cat with yellow eyes walked threw the moors of shadowClan. He slipped into the nursery, unseen and stole a kit away from a sleeping queen, and ate it there. He took each one of her kits and killed her with a bit to the neck, and dragged her off. Suddenly there was yowled and meowing. "Dawndreams is gone!" "Her kits! Theres blood everywhere!" "Where have they gone?" "Are they dead?" "I smell a loner!" "Snakesong! Not again!" 7 cats bounded out of the camp, but there was no traces of Snakesong or the dead queen. Suddenly a skeleton fell to the ground, blood dripping from it. "Dawndreams!" A female yowled. Snakesong jumped away and dissapeared in the vast woods.

[!~[B]rightie~!]

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